Someone wrote in [community profile] macgyverkink 2018-08-27 08:13 am (UTC)

Murdoc has Mac/ sends Videos/Pictures torture+non descriptive non-con

I just read this short fanfic:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/15812451/chapters/36807000?show_comments=true&view_full_work=false#comment_181264596


And now I really really would love to read this continuation!!:

Plot bunny (more: complete summary of my version of the most perfect story continuation ever- sorry imagination just went wild after reading your story, that never happened before):
Just imagine on the way home murdoc get's mac and then he starts sending the pictures/or better a few seconds of video in the same order as before (starting with mac on a chair or wall...) - but with real mac now after the thing has been done to him. so they always know what is coming next. And of course are daed scared of him doing what was in the last picture. But then the order of the last messages (cruzification/non-con) changes...messages with something like "just couldn't resist anymore" (nothing to graphic, maybe a short vid of naked mac curled in a corner shivering or wincing/sobbing) and then the cruzification part last. And than a rescue, a "it is nothing i couldn't handle" "we saw the video of you afterwards for god's sake" "little moment of weakness, forgett it- I'm ok, shit happens" - defiant but secretly broken mac and loads and loads of comfort.
Then: a murdoc who escapes again and threatens to come visit again for the "fun" part. Mac showing finally how scared he really is that everything, especially the non-con part would happen again. then a murdoc trick luring him in through capturing Jack - Mac of course coming even though he is dead scared, Jack beeing uber uber protective (but gagged in the corner), than maybe a close call but a happy end with a last minute rescue from the others (shocked at what would have almost happened again) and a final round of comfort for everyone:).
I've never think I was that inspired by a fic ever :D... please please someone who can actually write write this, or along the lines! Btw. the non-con part I find allways hard to read and usually I think it is better if it is kept very very vague (like it just happened, maybe some short memory flashbacks).. but the H/C that results out of that is often the most intense, that's why I added it in my "oh if that could be written" story.


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